hey everyone here is were u can post any poems that u have made and what peoples opinion about them.Please don not take anyones poems.or I will find out or someone will tell me and u will be reported.ok thank you!for the time to read and post ur poetry here.
*~*misty*~* A.k.A iluvs2rock2

just make sure to post who wrote it ;)

yea thats ok u dont have to have written it just make sure u write who its by so that u wint get in trouble and i will post my peotry soon just dont have time rite now.and this is the whole point of this topic.is to share ur poetry give opinions and to say what u think.and to express ur self here just no spaming plz.
thanx.
*~*misty*~*A.k.A.iluvs2rock2

poetry rox


hmmmm

nature has trees
nature has breeze
nature makes some people wheez
nature has bees
nature can make people sneeze
nature is a pleese
nature can make cheese
without nature where would we be
maybe we'd be as small as a flea

hope everyone likes it \m/

maybe rhyme a little less :p your supposed to rhyme but every line did :p , i dont know any poetry i might try later on because i like rap so i can rhyme atleast :)

ugh well poerty does not have to rhymn at all.its just a way to express ur feeling not usless things that make no sense.lol well hmm yea i hate rap its so ugh not cool it gets on my nerves and plz try not to diss peoples poems just say if u dont like or u do like ok ...well heres a poem of mine and yes it deoes not rhymn cuz its not supposed to there are so many different types of poetry that dont rhymn well here it is.
this is called "Just"

just close your eyes
jsut hold your breathe
this will be quick and painless
as i kiss you
just let me be with you as long as you let me
and i havent caught my breathe from the moment we met
just close you eyes
just hold you your breatheso we can spread our wings and fly away..away...
just close your eyes
just hold your breathe
for one more minute and let me go
im slipping from your hands
your pulling me closer
i just close my eyes
hoping im not alone
but my eyes are wide open
and your not there
tears begin to fall
you can see droplets of my tears running down my face
just close your eyes
just hold your breathe one last time
and pray im in your arms because..
my heart beats only for you
so why cant you help me
the reason i cry
is that i cant bare to be alone
your always there for me
so where are you now its all my fault
my tears just stop and i smile that your there again in my life
just close your eyes
just hold your breathe
as i kiss you as i hold you
one last time

ok well that was my poem itrs actaully a song that i made for my band..well tell me what you think of it..and plz do not...take as your own work on any ones peoms cuz we will know ..well thanx for reading
much luv!!

yes i did.i write them for the band i am in.and im the vocals.in it and thanx im glad you like it.
<3 misty

i sit n this room
thinking, thinking
who i really i'am
and guess wat
i cant identify
myself then i wonder
who can identify me?then i think
2 myself and then
i finally noe who
can identify me and
i noe that 1 person is

GOD

cool poem.nice use of words.i liked it.
<3 Misty

you guys have great poems
lets see here...

luv is in the air
to be in it do u dare
don't wrry bout the ppl that snare
be with who you want
don't listen to ppl taunt
be you
be true
if u luv and the person luvs back
your meant be together
just listen to your heart
let your feelings lose like a dart
together you can remain true
aprt u are nothing
don't let ppl break you down
there mad u have luv it makes them frown
don't let there jeolusy take you
come back from everything they do
u do it
u can get threw
only with the one you luv
do'n runaway
face your fears and stay
u can take it
just sit
eventually there scorn will go away
just be who u wnat to be
be with the person u wnat to be with
and togetheru will remain
unstoppable to strain

i don't think it's great but thats for you guys to decide

that was an awsome poem.

thanks a lot my work is finally reliezed

hmm i got another kinda sad though

New York is my home state
to me it has a 5 star rate
that place is so great
in city there are gangs
all u have to do is atay away from the big bangs
i miss it so much
i just want another touch
i luved it there
to me no place will compare
there was the sad day of 9/11
i hope those ******* don't go to heaven
it was the best place
i didn't have a single disgrace
and then here i came
it was a shame
i made new friends
but it wasn't the same
polutted this town is
with the papermill buis
i don't hate it
but i wish i could sit
back in New York
i think i'm homesick
live there again would be a future i'd pick

hope you guys luv it

wow i loved it such whoa i love the way u used ur words.

thank a lot i have a lot o free time to do these things

drugs arn't kool
u would be a fool
u might as well drown in a pool
they'll get you kicked outta school
that was one i just made up

u make me laugh
u make me cry
if i lose you i think ill die
i luv you
it is true
together we will fly
never gonna have to sigh
u and me both
will never loathe
u kno it's true
the feeling i get around you
together unstoppable
apart we are nothing
this is what luv rlly means
i never imagined in my dreams..

i know these luv poems get old but for now it's all i got

well the first one was ok but the second one i liked very much.

lol-don't ask why i find that funny
the first one wasn't meant to be great



they say theres no pain theres no gain
but thats not true u don't always need the strain
just use your brain
you'll find a way
someday
then you'll cheer huray
i don't think u need the pain
u know u can gain
it's not a need
it's not a want
pain doesn't have to be seed
my story all should read

ok i know it's not great but it's all i can come up with for right now

omg thats an awsome poem the best i have seen on this topic.i thought it was great.u have a real talent for poetry.
<3 Misty

great poem \m/ \m/ it seems like it could be a song

hmm i don't think i have anything that good

1) read this like a song

Doom,death and destruction
Everyone thinks it's kool
So ppl go off destroying things
The terror will never end
Rest in peice to all those killed by this
Understand ppl that it's not kool
Today the world will end if doesn't stop
Ignorence will kill us all
Our lives our at stake so stop before it's toolate
In our hearts we know it's wrong
Nothing should die because of this craze

2)read the first letters down
acrostic

the first letters: destrutioin? what's that? :p

lol stupid me

yeah it was pretty good.well if anyone ever needs advice on poetry or song writing just tell me ok.
much luv.
<3 Misty

your welcome.well i tried to explain or help as much as i can to you if ever need anymore advice just leave a comment on the forum here or message me.
<3 Misty.

hmmmm
once upon a time
there was a girl who found a dime
she was the oppisate of rich
her mom died cause ppl said she was a witch
this dime gave her hope
she used it to buy soap
when she woke up the next day
some1 said hurray
she was the most beutiful girl they ever set eyes on
they wanted her to say a pun
on air she went
next her heart bent
she went to a hollywood
every1 said she could
that she should
when she turned 16 the pres asked
with your buety will u marry me
the day after they had a party
so don't you see
the littlest money
can bring the greatest joy
even if it starts has a smaal toy

lol not to be mean but that poem is funny.well yeah ur sort of the same u try to hard to ryhmn so it seems.just giving advice.ok l8rs bye
<3 Misty

it was supposed to be funny
and thanks for the advice